COHESION IN SCIENCE LESSON DISCOURSE
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and the other to do with farmers and grading by an extraneous introduction to a
‘friend who farms the Riverina’. Again the text is heavily repetitive about wool
qualities, grading and even expense. Finally the sentences are complex, all but the
last two, and the sentence with a reference to a microscope in the body of the text,
have subordinate clauses. The students, therefore, must hold the main clause in
working memory while the speaker generates extraneous clauses before concluding
the sentence.
The students’ confusion is apparent by their failure to answer a question that
is a non sequitur about the name of a breed of sheep and not about fibre. In short,
following 239 words of text about underhair in sheep, goats, rabbits, camels and
alpacas, vicuna, cashmere goats, microscopic fibres, a friend that can grade wool
for its dimensions and elasticity, the teacher solicits a confused response. The text
is an example of breaching the maxims of Grice (1975), for the quality of a text
about the amount of information and its patency, clarity and relevance.
The relationship between relevance and discourse
Text 3 is ‘Structuring’. The teacher is explaining how to answer questions and
how the lesson should be written up as a practical. The discourse then becomes bi-
directional as students contribute to the dialogue.
Text 3:
Teacher—I’d like you to circle those seven questions, very easy, very quick to
answer. At the bottom of page 5 I’d like you to put question 8, question 8,
and could you say PTO, for turn over. If you turn over to page 8, there’s a
table that you will need to copy and—oh, sorry, page 6, question 8, you’ll
need to copy and do. Now, throughout this book, there are a series you
virtually have to have together, a number of research questions of this, of
which this forms the first eight. Fairly easy, and there’s really not much that
you should have any trouble with at all. OK? There is just one, question 3,
could you underline the word ‘husks’ H-U-S-K-S. Underline that, that’s
about the only thing that might, question 3, underline the word ‘husks.’
The other thing is that they do ask you to write up a full practical report
for a number of pracs. I’d be quite happy for you to write up the first one in
full detail, which means you’ve got to write the method out. If you do a really
good job of that, I won’t ask you to write up the next prac. For those of you
who do not write the first one up properly, I will be asking you to write it up,
every prac up fully until you actually give me a really good prac. So if you do
the first one really thoroughly and well, then I’ll just ask for the short method
during lesson time.
In this text there are 262 words and a reader may well assume it is less than
coherent. There are only three propositions for this number of words: the ques-
tions to be answered, underline a word, and write up the prac. The density of
referencing in the text caused by repetition and revisions confuse both a reader and
the students. Repetition can be legitimate elaboration, where the text is concen-
trated to avoid misunderstanding. The result here is that the students do not
understand their teacher. After ‘Structuring’, the teacher continued the lesson.
1. Teacher—And circle A to ungraded.